Feedback on Preliminary task

Feedback on the Preliminary task:

The majority of the feedback agreed with the critiques that I made my self for example music and that the scene was slightly confusing however the most agreed that the scene showed the codes and conventions of the Horror Genre and that the setting and lighting reinforced this.

Some of the feedback liked the hidden antagonist but some didn't and found it difficult to work out who or what the antagonist was.

Another common critique was an over use or appeared over use of hand held shots, however there was only one intentional hand held shot in the scene the others where from me not being able to hold my Ipad still and that the camera in my Ipad isn't internally stabilised. I also found that zooming the camera made the hole shot shake even more than be walking towards the target. This is one of the critiques that I knew about and will be able to fix in the real production as the camera I will be using will be on a tripod.

Sound was another area that people ether liked or disliked, most liked the music but some thought it needed more stereotypical music. some people thought that the quality of the sound effects varied drastically and that it needed more sound effects like the character breathing heavily after running.

Fortunately I had already picked up on most of the things that where wrong or not quite up to the standerd that I wanted, and all of the things that were commented on will be repetitively easy to fix
but as I once Heard "A film is never finished its only released"